Springfield resident, Duane La Chance, suffered 3rd degree burns while installing new pipes. It occurred at Springfield Municipal Power Plant and La Chance was listed in the intensive care unit at Springfield Hospital yesterday.
A Springfield resident was hit with 15,000 volts and as of yesterday, in serious condition. Employee of Gross Enginer, Duane La Chance suffered 3rd degree burns.
Car:
James Cunning and Wayne Clay, Springfield residents, were in a car collision today and resulted in Cunning being in satisfactory condition, according to Lincoln County Sheriff's Department.
After a car collision on US 63, a Springfield resident was hospitalized. Sheriff's Department state that James Cunning was taken to Springfield Hospital after being hit by a car crossing into his lane.
1a: no commas needed in first sentence. Put all that info in one lead sentence: Springfield resident Duane La Chance suffered 3rd degree burns while installing new pipes at Springfield Municipal Power Plant yesterday. The hospital report can come in P2.
ReplyDelete1b: We don't need to know who his employer is in the lead. Stick to the 5Ws/1H in the lead.
2a/b) Focus on the guy who was injured. That's what makes this accident newsworthy.
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