2. The forecast is for lower temperatures, falling to the low 30's by tonight. If the rain continues as expected, there could be a travelers' advisory.
3. To celebrate Veterans Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I. Troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags.
4. His weeklong ordeal will be finished when finals week is over. Until then, his well-being is in doubt.
5. 19-year-old man was arrested Monday for caring a Saturday night special without permit. After being released on bond, he disappeared. His whereabouts is unknown.
6. She'd hoped to be able to trade in her car after getting a tuneup, but she totaled it last night.
7. Could you Xerox that invoice for me? I need it for our year-end budget.
2) low 30s (plural, not possessive) (-1)
ReplyDelete3) You've corrected the errors, but added one of your own by putting a period after World War I. That created a sentence fragment. (-1/2)
5) A 19-year-old man (-1/2)
7) look up Xerox (-1)
17/20 - Good job!